My Errors in Essay #4

For my choice on essay number 4 regards to online classes that Lindenwood University offers and how they need to expand. As of now I believe I constructed a solid argument. Within my argument style essay, I addressed the benefits of online classes, as well as the down side. Sources that I added are all from real professors and legitimate companies, such as New York Times. However, in my essay I need to focus on one reason to support the one topic. Also, I have a few minor grammatical errors that need to be corrected, such as italicizing “New York Times”, as opposed to using quotes.


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